2.
                              PUNK 2
                       (momentarily civil)
                  A sucker for alliteration and internal 
                  rhyme.
                                                             CUT TO:
        MCU, MONOCHROME, HIGH CONTRAST:  Punk 1 turns back to Poet 
        1, again punctuating his diatribe.
                              PUNK 1
                  Yeah, and your alliteration is 
                  terminally weak, man. “Assault” and 
                  “so“... What’s that?
                       (half beat)
                  And no internal rhyme, man. So's how 
                  ‘bout I give you some internal 
                  bleeding?
                                                             CUT TO:
        TWO-SHOT, MONOCHROME, HIGH CONTRAST: Punks 1 and 2 keep 
        pounding their victims.
                              PUNK 1 (CONT'D)
                  And blank verse!?
                       (turning to Punk 2)
                              PUNK 2
                       (turning to Punk 1)
                  Call the hearse!
        SHOT CONTINUES, MONOCHROME, HIGH CONTRAST: Punks 1 and 2 
        resume beating Poets 1 and 2.
                                                             CUT TO:
        PUNK 2 OTS, MONOCHROME. HIGH CONTRAST, FEATURING POET 2:     
        Poet 2 responds.
                              POET 2
                       (feebly, but apparent)
                  Ouch! You jerk, that hurts!
                                                             CUT TO:
        POET 2 POV, MONOCHROME, HIGH CONTRAST, FEATURING PUNK 2: 
        Punk 2 responds and continues pummeling.
                              PUNK 2
                  Feeble, man. Slant rhymes....
                              PUNK 1
                       (interrupting)
                  Assonance.


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